1. My narrative does an ok job of involving the reader.
2.  My narrative does a good job of relating events in sequence.  I did get all of the things i did in order of what happened
3.  I need to put in more feelings and sounds in my narrative
4.  There are no conflicts or any tension in my narrative
5.  My narrative is written from my point of view
6.  Does not focus on the connection between past and present
7.  Does not make a point yet. I still need to do that.